giúp mình vs...

Question

mọi ng ơi?giúp mình xem đoạn dưới này viết đúng chưa với?mn sửa giúp mình vs nhé ?cám ơn mn rất nhìu..

Perfume is very popular wwith people in the world.it is one of favorite cosmetics everyone because it gie many the advantages for people such as:smell dool or confidence...besides that it make people many disadvantages.people can buy perfume anywhere because the hundred of branded company in the market today and some are home made perfume and it's very cheap.i think.when u go buy perfume u should buy very careful because there are many fake or perfume.it make the health's your become bad.so you will have a perfume  for you.i'm sure that perfume has made a significant impact on soicety during the past and now

Answer 1

Perfume is very popular with people in the world. It is one of favorite cosmetics to everyone because it gives many advantages for people such as: smell  or confidence...besides it also has disadvantages. People can buy perfume anywhere because there are a lot of kinds in super market, shop…and some of them which are home-made perfume and it is very cheap. I think that when you buy perfume you should buy very carefully because there are many fake perfume.It makes the your health become bad.I am sure that perfume has made a significant impact on soicety during the past and now