Viết luận: Chủ đề "If I had a thousand dollars"

Question

If I had a thousand dollars

The outline
1. First feelings
2. What things I would buy
3. What else I would do
4. The end

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Answer 1

if i have a thousand dollar?a-ha.i will feel very normal, because it isn  enough to implement my dream.however,if i have it,i will buy a motorbike so that my husband mustn't take me to the my office.how abou you?

Comments

my husband musn't take me to the my office: Câu này sẽ được dịch là chồng tôi không được đưa đón tôi đi làm. Đây không phải là ý bạn muốn nói chứ. Phủ định của must là don't have to bạn nhé. My husband don't have to take me to my office ( không cần the)

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oh thank you.i wonder who it is?

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are you married?

Answer 2

Woooow, if I had a thousand dollar. Thank God! I'm very happy, I think I'll jump up, 'cause I can register NLP couse, I have wanted to study that couse for a long time. It is  about $750. The change is $250, I'll help my friend. I hope we can study together. I hope she is very happy.

How about you?

"Have a awesome day" :))

Answer 3

If I have a thousand dollars. the first i will repair my motobike, because it is too old and dangerous. the second  i wil buy a present to my parents, the end i am going to drink something with my friend. the simple so, a thousand dollars is too lost for me give my dream! But it isn't too normal. :D. What about iu?

Answer 4

The first thing, If I have 1000 dollars from taking it on the streets, I will go to police and hand it to them, they will notice to everybody to find who losed that sum of money. Maybe the one losed that money have to be sad, and what do you think if he or she intended to use that money to pay hospital fee for their parents?

The second, if I have 1000 dollar from working hard, I will buy for every member in my family a gift, the rest I will to send it to the bank to have the interest. I think that's my trying to work hard, so I have to save it and use to do useful things in my life.

Thank you

Answer 5

If i had a thousand dollars, i will save that moneys in the bank and spend for my future. Because now one thousand dollars is small money, it is not enough to do big something such as openning the fashion shop. I think spend money for my babies is better.

Answer 6

If i had a thousand dollars,

Firstly, I will spend money in studying (ex: school fees...)

Then, I am  attempt to win  a place at university!

Secondly, I go  to work  and will live in good standing .

END.

Comments

bài của bạn sai nhiều ngữ pháp cơ bản lém.tuy ngữ pháp cuar t không tốt lems nhưng cũng còn tạm dùng được.hihi.tại t bị mất gốc rùi mà.

 để t sửa  bài giúp bạn

spend +on.=>Firstly, I will spend money on studying (ex: school fees...)

Then, I am  attempting to win  a place at university!(hiện tại tiếp diễn nha.)

Secondly, I go  to work  and will live in good life standard(not standing nha.(hihi. nếu bạn ở hn,có lẽ bạn lên tham gia một khóa học nào đó sẽ tốt hơn.mình có mấy đứa bạn ở hn sau khi tham gia 2 năm học tiếng anh mình thấy chúng nó tự tin giao tiếp lém,hix.không như mình vẫn dậm chân tại chỗ.hix.tại chỗ mình hổng có trung tâm.)

 

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Cảm ơn bạn nhiều! mong bạn và mọi người  có gì sai thì sửa giúp,  mình sẽ ghi chép lại để học!

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c ơi, secondly, có and ý, nối 2 câu cũng thời, do đó chỗ này ko thể vừa hiện tại đơn vừa tương lai đc, living standard chứ,

Answer 7

if i had a thousand dollars, I'm very happy. The first, I buy a motorbike. now, It's so necessary for my  movement. Then I spend money for the course of banking. :D

that's right !!!!

Answer 8

woa!i had a thousand dollars, it' s very suprised.  i felt lucky and i had a list of thing to do with these money. First, i would buy a small house with two floors and a garden. Then, i went to the supermarket  to buy a computer because it helps me to do many things such as: chatting, listening to music, watching tv, communicating with other people in other places. third, i used those money to travel around the world. this is my dream when i was a young child. i would visit london where you can practice and improve your English. i would arrive to Paris that is romance city and the capital of fashion. and i have many thing which have in my mind i wantes to do. but the most thing i wanted to do is i want to open a restaurant of Pho. i believe my restaurant is crowed of customers. Do you thing all thing that i want are to become really. to me, i think tat is to happen to me in the future!hi

Comments

bạn ơi một nghìn đô( 20 triệu) chứ đâu phải nghìn tỷ mà bạn mua được lém thứ thế?haha

Answer 9

A thousand dollars, wow, i'll be very happy and i have a list of thing to do with these. For example, i can buy a mobile phone and a laptop for my own business. Or use these money for charity, which help the unlucky people to reduce their financial burden and so on,

A thousand dollars is not a large amout of money but if you spend it on the right things, right ways, it will show you a great efficiency of your work.

có gì sai bạn sửa dùm mình nhé ^^. Thanks

Answer 10

Wow! A million dollars, it's a really big dream of my life. How to use a huge of money? In my opinion, if I had a milion dollars, I would get a small of money to go shopping myself. For the remaining, I would open a bank account to save my money first. Then I could find an potential area to invest and making profit.