Topic: Introduce about yourself

Question

Introduce about yourself

( Bài luận: Giới thiệu về bản thân)

Answer 1

Hi, everybody

My name is Thi. i am twenty five year old, now i work at district 3 in HCM City.  Today i would like to joint your group, I hope i can make friend with everyone and study english together. I like studying english but my english is not good. I don't still find out the best way to learn english effectively.

Thank you for reading my topic and i am so nice to joint this your group

Comments

mình có thể góp ý cho bạn một số lỗi nhé:  

i am twenty five years old nhé bạn

 i would like to joint your group phải dùng là  i would like to join a (or this) group 

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Cảm ơn bạn nhiều nhé!

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Quick spot check... I have taken the liberty to correct some minor mistakes and post the paragraph again for your reference. Please note to underlines

I am twenty five years old.  Now I am working in District 3, Ho Chi Minh City. Today I would like to join your group. I hope I can make friends with everyone and we can study English together. I like studying English but my English is not good. I haven't found the best way to learn English effectively.

Thank you for reading my text (or self introduction but not my topic). I am so happy to join this group. (seperate by two sentences, comma is not suitable in this case)

P.S.

You should always remember to write "I" in capital letter. Basic rule  :-)

 

Answer 2

hi everybody, i'm student of fourth year at hue college of foreign language. English is my second language because my major is French. Let's learn together !!! if someone want to learn french, get contact me pls^^(just somebody living in Hue city).

Comments

if someone wants... and gets,,vì đại từ bất định luôn chia số ít

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oh, thank bạn nhé, mình viết xong không đọc lại nên như thế^^

Answer 3

Hi everybody!

My name is Trinh .I'm 22 years old . i have just finish my coure in guide ,i  dont have worked ,i think i dont have good healthy to do this worked .Now .I want to learning for my chef ,maybe i will open a restaurant with my husband in the future , i hope it become true ,now ,i have a husband very nice and take care for me ,i feel very happy when i met him .thanks god and thanks everybody for my share , have a nice day

Comments

have just finished( not finish) ,course( not coure), work( not have worked), health( not healthy), work ( not worked), learn( not learning), learn to cook to become a chef,it will become true(not become), my husband is very nice and he cares for me well

Answer 4

hi lady and gentlement.

My enhlish name is Hunty,i am 20 years old,i come from Thai Nguyen University of Technology.now i consider to joint  a business english group.at the moment,my English vocabulary is not enough,i hope i can add friend with someone,who can practice to help me to iprove my vocabulary.

thank you for reading my tocpic.

Comments

now, i am considering joining ,,make friend(hay hơn) bỏ phẩy, who can help me improve my vocabulary( practice+ ving, help sb do st, nếu viết thế nghĩa ko rõ,, với lại ngữ pháp thì có thể giúp đc chứ từ vựng là do tích lũy đc giúp sao đc ạ?)

Answer 5

My name's Thuong,It's mean :"Love".I'm 24 years old.I'm living in Thu Duc,I want to learn English and hope you help me ang to join your group.

Answer 6

Hello everybody!^^

My name's Kim Ngan. It's mean: " Gold and Silver"^^. I'm studying in the Social Science and human university (HCM city) at the evening.I dont have many opportunities to practice my English. i'm accidental to see this group. I jointed it. I think this web is very interesting. I like study to translate English.I hope everybody help me.^^ Thanks so much. I'm 22 years old. My country is Binh Duong province.

Nice to make friends with everyone.

Have a nice day, everybody!^^

Answer 7

hello you guys!

Glad to introduce myself! :D!

My name's Quý dổm! lol! I'm very old guy but really want to lean and improve my english skills as well as to make friend with all of you.

And  i come from Nghe An pro, almost of you come from HCM ciity :D!

So nice to meet you here!

 plz visit my facebook's page! Welcome! :D!

https://www.facebook.com/quy.dom.7?ref=tn_tnmn

Answer 8

hello everybody!

my name is huong , i'm 20 years old , i from Hanoi and  i'm studying second-year student of Univercity of economics and business . i like study english but my english is  verry bad. i hope everryone can help me improve my english. thank you!!!! :)

Comments

Hi bạn!

Hy vọng có thể giúp bạn trau dồi ngoại ngữ...

Bạn cố gắng viết đúng nghữ pháp và từ vựng nhé.

from là giới từ => i am from Hanoi

liek + V-ing => like studying Englis

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Hi bạn!

Hy vọng có thể giúp bạn trau dồi ngoại ngữ...

Bạn cố gắng viết đúng nghữ pháp và từ vựng nhé.

from là giới từ => i am from Hanoi

liek + V-ing => like studying English

Answer 9

hi everybody!! my name is huong, i'm 20 years old , i'm studying second-year of university of economics and business. please too meet you !!!

Comments

nice to meet you!

Answer 10

Hello everybody!

I've just registred to this group a few minutes. Nice to meet you guys. I'm student in final year and  live in Can Tho city. Although my major is english but I think my English skills aren't good. So from now on, I decide to study E more industrious than this and honestly I'm very glad if I can make friends with you guys in this site.See u