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Question

 

Nếu một ngày nào đó, bạn cảm thấy thật buồn và muốn khóc..
Hãy gọi cho tôi!
Tôi không hứa sẽ làm cho bạn cười, nhưng biết đâu tôi sẽ khóc cùng bạn!

 

If one day u want to cry and are really sad…

Please call me

I don’t  swear that can make u smile, but I can cry with u!

Answer 1

I don’t  promise to make u smile, but I can cry with u!

Answer 2

If one day you feel like crying...Call me.

 

If one day you feel like crying...Call me.
I don't promise you that..
I can make you laugh
But I can cry with you

If one day you want to run away-
Don't be afraid to call me
I don't promise to ask you to stop
But I can run with you

If one day you don't want
to listen to anybody;
Call me and...
I promise to be very quiet

But... If one day you call
and there is no answer
Come fast to see me...
Perhaps I need you

Answer 3

If one day, you feel too sad and want to cry..Please call me!

May be, I can't make you laught but i can't cry with you.

Answer 4

if some day, you fell  very sad. call me now!

i dont promiss to make you smile but i can cry with you!hix;))